Admission Essay

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Good afternoon,  I am here today looking for a professional who would help write my admission essay for Nursing School. I got a paper with the following instructions:   “It is important in health care that you are able to communicate clearly. For this reason, please provide an attached sheet of paper a properly constructed essay explaining the following topics: 1. Reason(s) for desiring to enter the ADN program. 2. List your strengths and weaknesses. 3. List your hobbies. 4. One thing you have accomplished that has given you great satisfaction. 5. Any other information about yourself which you feel is pertinent for this application. Now, I am not the best at putting together my thoughts into professional paragraphs, so I am going to speak about me. I hope it helps you figure out my story and come out with a killer paper! Thank you very much in advance, so here I go. -My name is Carlos Cornejo, I am from Venezuela and I am 29 years old . I came to this country when I was 17 years olds pursuing my dreams of becoming a professional in the medical field. I have a beautiful 2 years old daughter, her name is Pia, and she is the main reason why I am making this big decision to continue my professional education. I would love to become a nurse because my personality and attitude will definitely make me be a successful nurse. I am very patient and caring, I have visualized myself as a nurse and it feels amazing. I am fascinated about the human body and how it works. From biochemistry to physiology, I am always willing to learn and it would be so rewarding to provide assistance to people to overcome health issues with my knowledge. I love the idea of working with patients 1-1 and dedicate my life to make people’s lives better. Interacting with patients, and making the best recommendation to overcome most health issues is definitely my desire -My strengths and weaknesses. I would say I am very good at listening to people and being patient. I listen and study people’s behavior through communication so I can adhere to the best solution based on the information obtained at the moment. My weakness, people tell me that I am too nice with people, that I trust too much. People think I might be weak by acting caring or nice, But I am not. I use my personality to get to open up or break the ice with people to gain their trust and be able to find the best solution for the customer or patient. -My hobbies, I love photography. I love taking pictures for real estate. During the weekends, If i am not taking pictures to houses i would be taking my daughter out with my camera and capture silly moments with my family. I love taking some weekends off to go and skate on the beach to relax and appreciate nature. -One of my biggest accomplishments is building a solid family nucleus in my home. I am very blessed and I work very hard to maintain balance at home. I consider myself a happy husband and father. Since I was a child, I wanted to see a different environment when I happened to build my own family. I saw a lot of issues and fights from my parents and I always wanted to make a change when it happened to me, and I did. My wife and I do a great job communicating with each other about what bothers us and what really makes us happy. -Extra information: The reason why I am also back at school now is because I could continue my career before, which I stopped in 2014 due to lack of legal documents to be able to enroll in a university. After almost 7 years, my desire of becoming a professional in the medical field has not vanished and now that I got my green card, I am hungry to get back on school and finish my career as a nurse. This is it. Please, feel free to add any competent statement that will help me to get approved to start in the nursing program. Thanks in Advance! Carlos.