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I have done this assignment and had gotten an 7/10 and I have to upload a revision. and would love to get a better mark on the revision, if we could fix it up. I have attached the professors feedback and what I need to change to the script.
The revision is graded on the extensiveness of the revisions. Light revisions (line edits only, correction of typos and grammar or confusing passages) will receive no more than 5/10, even if the original workshop piece received a higher grade. Therefore you should choose for revision the piece that holds the most scope for revision, and you should make substantive edits (changes to number and order and length of scenes, changes to characters and characterization, changes to where the story starts and ends, development of images and setting and conflict, etc.).
Let me know if any questions.
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