Project #1: Revise Essay #2 yfan eng101

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Step 1 For this project, you are going to work on editing and revising your submission for Essay #2: Mindset.  Take a look at the feedback and corrections for this essay and reread your work to determine any other necessary revisions or edits to make.  You need to revise the content, structure, and mechanics on the essay to create a new final version to submit to me.  Your efforts can score a total of 75 points here, and your score will depend on the thoroughness of your work.  Obviously, the higher your original score, the less work you probably have here.  Feel free to make any revisions and corrections that you see fit that I did not point out. Step 2 Create a bullet point list below your essay of the changes that you made to improve your essay. You efforts here can score a total of 25 points. Step 3 Below your revised essay for Step 1 (so part of the same document), you need to type (in paragraph format) a response to the following questions.  Each question should comprise its own paragraph, and you should make sure to reference specific examples for each: What have you done well in your English 101 essays thus far? How have you specifically improved your writing throughout the term thus far? What will you need to work on to improve in college writing? This part of the Final Project is worth 50 points and will be graded for its content, structure, and mechanics. Great work on your submission for Essay #2, Sihan! You have superb content here and solid structure. Here are a few things to work on: (1) Make sure that your thesis statement (the last sentence of your introduction) previews your stance and your three key points of support which are your body paragraph’s specific topics. (2) How could you condense your work into one introduction, 3 body paragraphs, and a conclusion? Please also review the comments and corrections I inserted throughout the paper. We will work on revising this for Project #1 in Week 8! Keep up the great effort!