Toxic Shock

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cover sheet is not needed serous flaw in paper – you keep talking about streptococcus in diagnosis area – toxic shock is typically caused by Staphylococcus, you identified it as such in the testing section, you really need to get that fixed – search and replace streptococcus with Staph aureus read all the little bubbles do not capitalize words unless they are proper nouns or 1st word in sentence or have a real reason to be a capital letter read this out loud, there are several awkward bits be sure you have internal consistencycomplete 1.25/2 editing for organism name needed questions in testing – you never seem to actually identify the species of little round cells causing his problem – that is a serious flaw – oh wait you wrote it very incorrectly so it was hard to see as far as I can tell from treatment John is still in the hospital, if not how long was he there? dosage of drug?name of actual drug – there are multiple cephalosporins – oral or IV? section 1.5/2 treatment in testing area, anything you write about treatment outside of treatment section does not really exist for grading treatment items,ref 0.75/1 Fukui, Herbst – excess capitals in title https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/apa_style/apa_formatting_and_style_guide/reference_list_basic_rules.html organism name should be italics why is Bauman after Wilkins et al. – alphabetical! in text 1/1 ok O think, double check